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(2). During the twenties lawlessness and social nonconformity prevailed. In cities organized crime flourished without police interference, and in spite of nationwide prohibition of liquor sales, anyone who wished to buy a drink knew where to get one. Musicians like Louis Armstrong become favorites, particularly among young people, as many turned away from highly respectable classical music to jazz. One of the best examples of the anti-traditional trend was the proliferation of young \hair and shortening their skirts (Yancey 25).
(3). The use of a helmet is the key to reducing bicycling fatalities, which are due to head injuries 75% of the time. By cushioning the head upon impact, a helmet can reduce accidental injury by as much as 85%, saving the lives of hundreds of victims annually, half of whom are school children (\
(4). Matisse paintings are remarkable in giving the viewer the distinct sensory impressions of one experiencing the scene first hand. For instance, \of Tangier and the Bab el Aassa gateway near the Sultan's palace, where one can imagine standing on an afternoon, absorbing the splash of colors and the fine outlines. Even the sentry, the bowaab vaguely eyeing those who come and go through the gate, blends into the scene as though real (Plagens 50).
(5). How much higher skyscrapers of the future will rise than the present world marvel, the Sears Tower, is unknown. However, the design of one twice as tall is already on the boards, and an architect, Robert Sobel, thinks we currently have sufficient know-how to build a skyscraper with over 500 stories (Bachman 15).
4. Write a summary for the following passage. （summary综述）
Academic Honesty Policy
Gallaudet University students are expected to represent themselves honestly at all times and in all contact with University faculty, administration, and staff. Misrepresentation on University documents, course assignments, or examinations is in conflict with the spirit and teachings of a university. All students are expected to learn and abide by the rules and regulations of Gallaudet University, to provide full and accurate information on University documents, and to acquaint themselves fully with proper procedures for doing research, writing papers, and taking examinations. If a student knowingly provides false information or forges or conceals relevant information on admissions, registration, or any other University document, the student's registration may be canceled. If such a discovery is made after a student is officially enrolled in the University, that student may be dismissed from the University. A professor who discovers that a student is involved in unethical practices in connection with required coursework or examinations has full discretion to give a failing grade for the particular assignment, a failing grade for the course, and/ or recommend dismissal. Dismissal actions for academic dishonesty will be made by the Provost. Students dismissed for academic dishonesty will be ineligible to return to the University, except by special action of the Committee on Faculty and Student Affairs. [Key]
Sample of a summary from the \ Gallaudet University's \Honesty Policy\states that students need to be honest
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when filling out forms, taking tests, and doing writing assignments. If students are not honest, they can be severely punished. For example, if a student lies on an official form, like an application, the student can be dismissed from the university. Also, if a teacher finds that a student cheated on a test or a paper the teacher can grade the student's test or paper with an \ The teacher can also flunk the student for the whole course, or the teacher can ask the Provost to kick the student out of school for academic dishonesty. The Provost decides if a student should be dismissed or not
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Lecture 6
讲义例子：
(1) 【Awkward】 In the paper, a SZG4031 towing tractor is used as the sample vehicle, it components equivalent physical parameters are obtained by UG design and testing.
【Correct】 In this study, a SZG4031 towing tractor is used as the sample vehicle, it components equivalent physical parameters are obtained by UG design and testing.
(2) 【Incorrect】 Equation 2-6 can be respectively linearized as:…(equations given)… 【Correct】 Equations 2-6 can be linearized as… (equations given)…, respectively.
(3) 【Incorrect】 Then, the rows of vortex due to both of the long and short blades are transformed into two singularities on the plane and integrate the induced velocity along the blades respectively.
【Correct】 Then, the rows of vortex due to both of the long and short blades are transformed into two singularities on the plane and integrate the induced velocity along the blades. (4) 【Incorrect】 The dynamic characteristics of a rotor with asymmetric stiffness or with initial warp have been studied before respectively [1-4].
【Correct】 The dynamic characteristics of a rotor with asymmetric stiffness or with initial warp have been studied before [1-4].
(5) 【Incorrect】 The inlet and outlet temperature of the air cooler were measured using two thermocouples respectively.
【Correct】 The inlet and outlet temperature of the air cooler were measured by using two thermocouples.
(6) 【Incorrect】Studies of methodology and process of implementing remanufacturing mainly focus on durable products such as automobile motors, printers, and etc.
【Correct】 Studies of methodology and process of implementing remanufacturing mainly focus on durable products such as automobile motors, and printers. (7) 【Incorrect】Compared to traditional industry, Micro-electronic fabrication has three characteristics such as high complexity, high precision and high automation.
【Correct】 Compared to traditional industry, Micro-electronic fabrication has three characteristics: high complexity, high precision and high automation. (8) Many scientists have studied PHB, mostly because of its potential use as a biodegradable plastic.
(9) The potential use of PHB as a biodegradable plastic has prompted numerous studies of its physical properties and its production and purification. [1, 2, 3, 4]
(10) 【Incorrect】 Figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on surface of main and splitter blades.
【Correct】 Figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on the surface of main and splitter blades.
(11) 【Incorrect】 The voltage induced in the primary winding is proportional to the primary inductance according to the Faraday’s law.
【Correct】 The voltage induced in the primary winding is proportional to the primary inductance according to Faraday’s law.
(12) 【Incorrect】 Aluminum is not as a good conductor as copper.
【Correct】 Aluminum is not as good a conductor as copper.
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(13) 【Incorrect】 The software PowerSHAPE is chosen to be a 3D modeling tool; it is good at dealing with free surfaces and curves.
【Correct】 The software PowerSHAPE is chosen to be the 3D modeling tool; it is good at dealing with free surfaces and curves.
(软件PowerSHAPE经常被用来作3D建模工具；它擅长处理游离面和曲线 (在他的研究中只用了这一种3D建模工具，所以3D建模工具是特指，要用定冠词the)
(14) 【Incorrect】The academy is in charge of developing satellite technology and making space research.
【Correct】The academy is in charge of developing satellite technology and conducting space research.
(15) 【Incorrect】Since these reasons, it has become desirable for a computer to separate the text from images.
【Incorrect】For these reasons, it has become desirable for a computer to separate the text from images.
(14) 【Incorrect】 Purdue offers many majors in engineering. Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
【Correct】 Purdue offers many majors in engineering, such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
Some fragments are clearly not pieces of sentences that have been left unattached to the main clause; they are written as main clauses but lack a subject or main verb.
(15) 【Incorrect】 With the ultimate effect of all advertising is to sell the product.
【Correct】 The ultimate effect of all advertising is to sell the product.
(16) 【Incorrect】 By paying too much attention to polls can make a political leader unwilling to propose innovative policies.
【Correct】 Paying too much attention to polls can make a political leader unwilling to propose innovative policies.
(17) 【Incorrect】 My first-year philosophy professor was informative, lively, and a source of inspiration.
【Correct】 My first-year philosophy professor was informative, lively, and inspiring. (18) 【Incorrect】This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then its generation (产生) is described.
【Correct】This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then describes its generation. (19) 【Incorrect】 My philosophy professor not only demonstrated how to reason persuasively but also how to avoid logical fallacies.
【Correct】 My philosophy professor demonstrated not only how to reason persuasively but also how to avoid logical fallacies. (20)【Incorrect】He warned me to revise my essay and that I should pay close attention to parallel structures.
【Correct】He warned me to revise my essay and to pay close attention to parallel structures. (21) The sodium hydroxide (氢氧化钠) was dissolved in water. This solution(溶解) was then titrated(用滴定法测量) with hydrochloric acid（盐酸）.
(22) Figure 1 illustrates the quadratic relationship between distance and velocity. (23) Experimental evidence shows that the typical dose-response curve has an inverted J-shape. 12