例析英语话题作文写作技巧

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例析英语话题作文写作技巧

一、写作话题

如今,汉语受到全世界越来越多的人青睐,许多国家开设了汉语课或派出留学生来华学习汉语,还有大量的外国人踊跃参加汉语水平考试(HSK)。然而,有些中国人却对母语重视不够。请分析这种现象,并就此谈谈你的看法。

注意:

1. 词数在150左右;

2. 不要简单翻译原文,要有自己的观点。 二、写作策略 1.文体分析

本文属于开放性议论文文体,这种题型不同于传统的书面表达。传统的书面表达是一种控制性写作,即通过表格、图画及文字等进行要点提示,并规定作文的人称、时态、文体等;而开放性议论文则给出一定的素材或话题,让考生在此基础上自由发挥,对所给材料进行判断、论述和发表个人观点。这种试题有利于体现学生个性发展和思维的灵活性,符合新课程的理念,在2009年某些课改区的高考卷中已有所体现。

2.行文模式

对于绝大部分开放性议论文,基本上适宜用“三段式”的写法,具体来讲就是:

第一段:复述材料,用简短的话描述所给文字材料或者图标内容(解决是“what”的问题)。 第二段:阐述主题,分析该话题或现象产生的原因、可能产生的后果等(解决“why”的问题)。 第三段:作出总结,表明个人观点或提出希望或解决方案(解决“how”的问题)。 3.时态人称

这种文体多以一般现在时态、现在进行时和一般将来时态为主,人称采用第一、第三人称。即描述文字材料、图表内容和阐述主题时宜用一般现在时态或现在进行时态,第三人称;做出总结时宜采用一般现在时态和一般将来时态,发表个人观点用第一人称。

三、写作技巧 1.词语搜索

nowadays (现今); attract (吸引); all over the world (全世界); course (课程); send (派遣); a number of (一些); foreigner (外国人); take an active part in (积极参加); especially (尤其是); take notice of (注意); importance (重要性); rapid (迅速的); development (发展); economy (经济);

international (国际间的); position (地位); lead to (导致); phenomenon (现象); lack (缺乏); self-confidence (自信); shortsighted (目光短浅的); increase (提高); understanding (理解); culture (文化); value (珍惜); mother tongue (母语); popular (受欢迎的)。

2.句型搜索

It is?that?(强调句型); We hope?; I think?; It also shows that?; Only when we?can the Chinese? (倒装句)等。

3.单句表达

(1)Nowadays Chinese is attracting more and more people all over the world.

(2)Many countries have opened the Chinese course and sent students to China to learn Chinese. (3)A rather large number of foreigners are taking an active part in the HSK.

(4)Some Chinese people, especially, the youth, take no notice of the importance of Chinese! (5)It is the rapid development of Chinese economy and the rising international position of China that lead to this phenomenon.

(6)It also shows that some of Chinese people are lack of self-confidence and shortsighted. (7)We hope more people from other countries study Chinese.

(8)I think Chinese will really become popular around the world only when we Chinese value our mother tongue!

4.组句成篇

文章所需要的基本单句初步完成,现在,我们试着将其组织成一篇完整的文章。具体来讲,我们可以通过选用适当的连接词和过渡成分(如first; second; therefore; on the one hand; on the other hand; but; also; so; besides; in addition; however; still等)以及合理的语句顺序来组织谋篇。在此过程中,要体现尽量使用较高级词汇和复杂句式,使文章流畅自然,增强可读性和感染力。

第一段:本段属于描述所给材料部分,可由1~4句构成。第2、3句列举了汉语深受外国人青睐的具体表现,可用“what’s more”进行衔接表示意义的递进;第4句与前面的内容相对,可用“nevertheless”连接,表示意义的转折。

第二段:本段属于阐述主题部分,可由5、6两句组成。考虑到与上段的自然过渡,在第5句前增加过渡成份“As far as I’m concerned”。这两句都是对汉语外热内冷现象的原因分析,用“on the one hand ? on the other ?”连接起来,表示一个问题的两个方面。

第三段:本段属于做出总结部分。可由7-8两句构成。第7句提出了希望,第8句表示建议,需要用连词and连接成为并列句。此外,为了使第7句意义更加完备,还需要修饰一下,用高级语言形式“?

thus increasing their understanding of China, of the Chinese people and of Chinese culture”这一现在分词结构来补充,表示结果。第8句可改为倒装句,使句子富于变化,并对这一社会现象的个人建议进行强调,旗帜鲜明、铿锵有力,对全篇起到画龙点睛的作用。

四、习作示范

Nowadays Chinese is attracting more and more people all over the world. Many countries have opened the Chinese course and sent students to China to learn Chinese. What’s more, a rather large number of foreigners are taking an active part in the HSK. Nevertheless, some Chinese people, especially, the youth, take no notice of the importance of Chinese!

As far as I’m concerned, on the one hand, it is the rapid development of Chinese economy and the rising international position of China that lead to this phenomenon. On the other hand, it also shows that some of Chinese people are lack of self-confidence and shortsighted.

We hope more people from other countries study Chinese, thus increasing their understanding of China, of the Chinese people and of Chinese culture. And I think only when we Chinese value our mother tongue will Chinese really become popular around the world! (147字)

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