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参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own. Best wishes!
Yours Li Hua
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，
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是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
十、孝感
八、书面表达
61.随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”为题，写一篇短文。 写作要点：
1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…
2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱；人们… 3.感受, … 写作要求：
1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译； 2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整；
3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4.100词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white .The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better! 【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如take place，around me，used to be，convenient for，go out，different kinds of，lots of，most of us，look like，live a happy life，go on，become better and better等。而固定句型It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
十一、湖北恩施
61.书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.” ----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.” ----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》 “We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers(追梦人).” ----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。
要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实； 2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大； 3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。 写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯； 2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
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As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. 【答案】
In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved. 【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。 3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。 高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。
十二、贵州安顺
86.请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。