发布时间 : 星期五 文章2016高考作文复习（学生版）更新完毕开始阅读
necessary, students can even have a private online chat with a teacher.
The only column rule is that compositions must be about school life. Each month, students vote for the best composition and the winner receives a book.
Hope to read your composition here.
三十、物品介绍
物品介绍要用简明清晰的语言介绍或描述物品的名称、来源、特征、用途、优缺点等。 注意事项：
1. 写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。可用定义法、列举法等方式进行描述。
2. 时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史时，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动语态。 3. 避免开头指代不明。避免用it作主语引导第一句，而应该具体写出描述的对象。 I.高考经典范文背诵（2013全国卷II）
1.假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结，给开网店的美国朋友Tom写份信,请它代卖,要包括: 1.外观（尺寸.颜色.材料） 2.象征意义 3.价格
注意:1.100词左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.来头为你写好. Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li Hua
1.假定你是学生李华，现在有外国学生来你校交流学习。请你用英语写一篇介绍稿向他们介绍国宝——大熊猫。要点如下： 1. 大熊猫的习性。 2. 大熊猫的象征意义。
3. 其他你所了解的关于大熊猫的信息。 注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语已为你写好。
参考词汇：竹笋 bamboo shoots One possible version(参考范文): Dear friends,
It’s a great honor for me to introduce our national treasure — the panda.
The panda is a world-famous wild animal born in China. It only inhabits the forests in the
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west part of China. It has lived on the earth for over 10,000 years. Although they have fat figures, pandas are better at climbing trees than any other animal. The favorite food they depend on for living is bamboo shoots.
Pandas like drinking much water, so when finding water, they?ll drink like crazy. Originally, the name “panda” was given by a Frenchman. As is known, the panda is the symbol of luckiness and friendship, and the messenger of peace. Finally and interestingly, the panda tends to lose its temper easily when disturbed.
2.假定你是李华，你应邀为一家生产自动售货机的厂家编写自动售货机(vending machine)的英文介绍。要点如下： 1. 功能。 2. 工作原理。 3. 优缺点。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version(参考范文):
To make people?s life more convenient, vending machines appeared. Vending machines sell many different types of items, such as cold drinks, coffee, candy, tickets, newspaper and other types of small things. When the customer puts a coin into the machine and then pushes a button, he?ll get the goods he wants.
Vending machines are convenient and can save time for customers. Moreover, no workers are needed and vending machines can be used at any time. However, the prices of the items sold by vending machines are usually a little higher. Anyway, it?s a good choice for those who are in a hurry, especially when there?re no stores around.
三十一现象分析
现象分析的文章属于说明文，一般先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因，最后提出建议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通常用一般现在时态。
One possible version(参考范文): I．熟读常用的短语：
1. 引起某人的注意 draw/arouse one?s attention / be brought to one?s attention
2. 采取措施(做……) take measures (to do…) 3. 日益严重的问题an increasingly serious problem
4. 普遍现象 a common phenomenon 5. 改善这种情况 improve the situation
6. 全社会 the whole society 7. 安全意识 safety awareness 8. 有效的办法/途径 an effective approach 9. 越来越多的…… an increasing number of… 10. 共同关注 a common concern
11. 热点话题 a hot topic 12. 人们普遍认为 .......
It is commonly believed/recognized that… 点如下： 13. 社会发展的必然结果 1. 存在的现象。
the inevitable result of social development 2. 引起此现象的原因。 14. 随着经济的快速发展 3. 你的建议。 with the rapid development of economy 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 15. 面临新的机遇和挑战 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 be faced with new opportunities and challenges One possible version(参考范文): II. 范文背诵： Every year after the College Entrance Exam, One possible version(参考范文): the top scorers will attract wide attention from Recently the safety of school buses has across the country. They accept various interviews, become a serious problem, which has attracted participate in different social activities and even more and more public attention. So in our class gain lots of prize money. we have held a heated discussion on the causes Generally, there?re several reasons why top and solutions. scorers are worshiped and popular. First, many After the discussion, we find that the problem is people are affected by the Chinese traditional caused by three kinds of reasons which include thoughts, thinking that top scorers will often have overloading, speeding as well as weak safety a bright future. Second, average students think awareness. that top scorers are good learners, from whom As for the solutions, first of all, we all think it they can absolutely learn a lot. Third, parents necessary to examine the safety of the school want their children to imitate the top scorers. buses. Besides, we should stop risky buses from In my opinion, it?s all right to give proper being operated. Only if all people attach attention to those top scorers. But we shouldn?t importance to safety education to raise safety pay too much attention to them. After all, exams awareness can traffic accidents decrease. and marks are not everything. III. 模拟训练题： 1.随着经济的发展，人们的生活水平日益提高，3.假如你是李华，最近你所居住的城市（北京）一些中学生的消费问题成了一个热门话题。他的雾霾严重影响了人们的生活。请根据写作要们花钱大手大脚，令学校难以管理。请写一篇点给报社写一篇稿件反映这一问题。 短文对这种现象进行分析。要点如下： 写作要点：1. 雾霾带来的危害。 1. 存在的现象。 2. 你的建议。 2. 引起此现象的原因。 注意：词数100左右。 参考词汇:雾霾 smog 3. 你的呼吁。 One possible version(参考范文): 注意：1. 词数100左右。 As we all know, smog has always been a 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 serious problem in Beijing, which has done great One possible version(参考范文): harm to our daily life. Recently it has become Today, it’s a common phenomenon that some more and more serious. The heavy smog has middle school students are extremely lavish in caused many traffic accidents, which has brought spending money, which has aroused wide great sadness to the families. In the street, you concern. can see many people wear masks. But unluckily, Generally, there’re several factors many old people wear and babies can?t escape contributing to the phenomenon. First, with the suffering from illness caused by smog. improvement of people’s living standard, Therefore, it is very urgent for us to take middle school students, the treasure of their measures to reduce the smog. It is very vital to parents, can get lots of pocket money from their educate people, especially factory owners to raise parents. Second, some students spend less on their awareness of protecting the environment. regular meals and necessities to save their pocket Moreover, people should go to work by bus or money, with which they buy snacks, cellphones, bike instead of driving every day. And media fashionable clothes, etc. Third, young as they are, should call on citizens to work together to do they learn to blindly worship those with much something to save the air that we can?t live pocket money, which causes them to compare without. with each other on something unrealistic. To help the students, I call on schools and 三十二 经历感受 parents to take measures to cultivate the 文体概述 students’ correct value of consuming. 叙述经过就是叙述已经经历过的事情，包 括故事、通讯报道、日记周记等，以一般过去2. 每年高考后，高考状元被“热炒”。他们被各时为主，按事情发生的时间先后来叙述。如： 种采访和社会活动所包围，甚至可以得到大笔1. 表示时间：once upon a time, one day, the next 奖金。请写一篇短文对这种现象进行分析。要day, last Friday, on the morning of April 5。
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