安徽省2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导

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There goes the bell! (高级) (2)改变语态

例如:People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) (3)使用不定式

例如:He is so kind that he can help me.(一般) He is so kind as to help me.(高级) (4)使用过去分词 例如:① She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级) ② Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.(一般) Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级) (5)使用V-ing形式 例如:① When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般) On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.(高级) ② If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.(一般) I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级) (6)使用名词性从句 例如:①It disappointed everybody that he didn't turn up.(一般) The fact that he didn't turn up disappointed everybody.(高级) ②I happened to have met him.(一般) It happened that I had met him.(高级) ③To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(一般)

What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级) (7)使用定语从句

例如:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般) The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级) (8)使用状语从句 例如:① I won't believe what he says.(一般) No matter what he says, I won't believe.(高级) ② If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out.(一般)

You can go out on condition that (provided that) you come back before six o'clock.(高级) ③ If she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(一般)

Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shall we do?(高级) (9)使用虚拟语气 例如:① If you had taken my advice, you wouldn’t have failed in the exam. (高级) ② I wish it were spring all the year around. (高级) ③ He speaks English so fluently as if he had studied English in England. (高级) (10)使用倒装句 例如:① The teacher didn’t come until he finished his homework. (一般) Not until he teacher came did he finish his homework. (高级) ② I never shall do this again. (一般) Never shall I do this again. (高级) ③ As though the chemistry homework was very difficult, it was finished in time. (一般) Difficult as was the chemistry homework, it was finished in time. (高级) (10)使用强调句型

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例如:① Professor Lin teaches us English. (一般) It is Professor Lin who teaches us English. (高级) ② I saw the film in Shanghai. (一般)

It was in Shanghai that I saw the film. (高级)

四、 整理成篇,行文连贯

众所周知,要写出清晰流畅的文章,需要把文章中各部分巧妙地连接在一起。这样可使文章自然而别致,并能层层展开主题句,完整地表达中心思想。考生答题时要根据所给的条件、提示、将事情发展过程合理排列成文;同时要注意文章逻辑要清楚,先写什么,后写什么,并应注意句与句、段与段之间的连贯;要能够使用一些常用的表示时间顺序、方位关系、因果关系等逻辑概念的过渡词语,将句子按英文习惯连贯成篇。切忌按中文意思,随意排列组句。

过渡词是一种关系指引词,一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外,代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”,在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用,学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑,启、承、转、合,过渡自然,融会贯通,连成一体。

下面我们来看看常见的一些过渡词语:

1、根据意思和作用的不同,过渡词可以分为以下十六类: (1)表并列关系的过渡词:

and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。

(2)表递进关系的过渡词:

besides, in addition(加之,除……之外), moreover(此外,而且), what’s more, what’s worse等。

(3)表转折对比的过渡词:

but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。

(4)表原因的过渡词:

because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to(由于), for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。

(5)表结果的过渡词:

so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that , accordingly等。

(6)表条件的过渡词:

if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。 (7)表时间的过渡词:

when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。

(8)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:

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first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(后来), meanwhile(几乎同时), thereafter(在那以后), last, finally, eventually(终于)等。

(9)表换一种方式表达的过渡词:

in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。 (10)表进行举例说明的过渡词:

for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。

(11)表陈述事实的过渡词:

in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。 (12)表强调的过渡词:

certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。

(13)表比较、对比的过渡词:

like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。

(14)表目的的过渡词:

for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。 (15)表总结的过渡词: in a word(总之,简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。

(16)表增补的过渡词:in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what’s more, similarly, next, finally 等。

2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。

(1) 用于“启”的过渡词语

用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头:

过渡词: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,

过渡句:It is often said that…, As the proverb says…,

It goes without saying that…, It is clear/obvious that…, Many people often ask …

(2) 用于“承”的过渡词语

表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中: 过渡词: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what

is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt,

过渡句:It is true that…, Everybody knows that…, It can be easily proved that…,

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No one can deny that…

The reason why …is that …, There is no doubt that…,

To take…for an example (instance) …, We know that…,

What is more serious is that… (3) 用于“转”的过渡词语

用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中:

过渡词:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,

过渡句:I do not believe that…, Perhaps you’ll ask why…

This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,

Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found, That’s why i feel that…

(4) 用于“合”的过渡词语

用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中: 过渡词: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up

过渡句:From this point of view … On account of this we can find that … The result is dependent on …

Thus, this is the reason why we must…

有些考生在作文中使用过多简单句,成了简单句堆砌;有的写复杂句时,动辄用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的,反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象,可以通过使用不同的过渡词,不仅能够丰富句型,而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚,意义更连贯。

例如: 学生习作:

TV And Website

TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Websites also have different sections. You may choose the one you are most interested in.

They are different in many ways. Moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation. It makes you feel that you are just on the spot. The programs change every day. Professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Some information on websites changes all the time. Not all of it is so updated. Everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter.

Every medium has its own features. It is hard to say which is better.

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