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Yours， Li Hua
One possible version: Dear__Sir/Madam，
I am very glad to learn that your school will hold the English summer camp which contains many courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first aid and so on.
I want to attend a course about giving first aid because it is important for us to learn some knowledge about first aid in our daily life.If a person gets injured，he needs medical care immediately before a doctor can be found.At that time, one second really counts.After graduation, I plan to devote my life to medical research.Hopefully, the course will help me a lot to deal with some common injuries.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours， Li__Hua
(三)建议信(通常是应邀回信)
其结构为：(1)表明写作意图；(2)具体的建议及理由；(3)表达愿望。 [常用句式] 1．常用开头句式
①I’m writing to give you some tips/suggestions on how to spend gift money. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些如何花压岁钱的建议。
②I’m pleased to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.
非常高兴收到你的来信。在信中，你向我征求关于如何与同学相处好的建议。 ③I know you have trouble in learning English after reading your letter. 在读了你的信之后，我了解到你在英语学习上有困难。 ④Here are three useful suggestions. 这里有三条有用的建议。 2．常用正文句式
①First of all, you’d better buy some books to enrich yourself. 首先，你最好买一些书来丰富自我。
②What’s more, you may as well join in a summer camp, which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
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此外，你不妨参加夏令营，这不但开拓你的视野而且有助于培养团队精神。
③Last but not least, it is a good idea to give away some money to those who are in need of help.
最后但同等重要的是，把钱捐赠给需要帮助的人是个好主意。 ④If I were you, I would lend him a hand. 如果我是你，我会帮助他。
⑤Having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
与父母心平气和地面对面地交谈，耐心地聆听是一个更好的选择。 [万能模板] Dear ________，
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________．(引出对方需要建议的主题)
Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议) First, it is important to ________．Then, it also helps to ________. Besides, it should be a good idea to ________. You can also ________．(提出建议)
As to ________， I suggest ________．(需要具体到某一方面) In addition, ________．(其他的建议)I’m sure ________．(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)
I hope ________．(表达愿望) [即时演练]
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想在他的学校以“Chinese poetry”为主题举办一系列活动，他写信向你求助，请给他回信，提供至少两条建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Dear Tom，
I’m so glad to hear that you are planning to hold activities about Chinese poetry. To make it more meaningful and unforgettable, here is some advice.
To begin with, you’d better introduce the history of Chinese poetry which dates
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from ancient times briefly. Then you could share the different forms of poems with students. Take Tang poetry and Song ci for example, they are very popular among English speakers.
Eventually, since poems can convey certain emotions, it’s a good idea to let the students feel them by reading some poems. It’s also recommended that students write some poems of their own.
I hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful and wish you success!
Yours， Li Hua
(四)求助信
其结构为：(1)点明写信目的，清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助；(2)具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求；(3)诚恳地提出希望，表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。
[常用句式]
①The reason why I am writing to you is that I failed in the maths exam and I need your help.
我给你写信的目的是我数学考试失败了，我需要你的帮助。
②I have some difficulty in learning English, which bothers me a lot. 我在英语学习方面有困难，这很困扰我。 ③I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. 我写信请你帮我个忙。
④Faced with/Facing so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向你求助。
⑤I’m eager for your timely help./I’m eager to get your timely help. 我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
⑥I really don’t want to lose this opportunity. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
我确实不想失去这个机会，如果你能帮助我我将不胜感激。 ⑦What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do. 困扰我的事情是我不知道做什么。 [万能模板] Dear Sir/Madam，
I’m ________．(自我介绍)I’m writing to get some help about ________．(说明写信目的)
I have met many difficulties in ...(遇到的困难)First, ... Besides, ...What’
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s more, ...(分层次说明自己的困难)
Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ...so that...? (请求一) In the meanwhile, I beg you to...(请求二) Also, I would like you to...(请求三) I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and...(表示感激)
Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望) [即时演练]
假定你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在给外教Melinda写邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含：
1．吵架的原因； 2．吵架后的心情；
3．请求Melinda给出解决办法。 注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．邮件首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Melinda，
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours， Li Hua
One possible version: Dear__Melinda，
The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.
The quarrel occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping last weekend. Because of the coming examination，she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, causing me great depression. I am sincerely sorry to see things going like this and I have been feeling frustrated ever since.
I really don’t want to lose this friend.Could you please offer me some effective and practical advice? Looking forward to your reply.
Best__wishes!
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