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第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）
46.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 结束语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 分析】
本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。 【详解】1.审题立意
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本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。 2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。 3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with/I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。
第二节：概要写作（满分25分）
47.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet. If the world followed the so-called “planetary health” diet, the scientists told Reuters that each year more than 11 million early deaths could be prevented. Scientists say that the way we produce and eat food is very bad for the planet. For the health of the planet, they claim the same diet would reduce greenhouse gases and save more land, water and animals.
Tim Lang, a professor at Britain’s University of London, co-led the research. He told Reuters, “The food we eat and how we produce it determines the health of people and the planet, and we are currently getting this seriously wrong.” Lang added that the world’s population is expected to grow to 10 billion people by 2050. If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by “improving food production and reducing food waste.”
Well, what do you eat on the planetary health diet? The scientists who created this diet say it is largely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy, fish and meat. The diet calls for cutting red meat and sugar by 50 percent and doubling the amount of nuts, fruits, vegetables and legumes.
Food situations around the world are not equal. In certain areas, this would mean great changes. People in North America, for example, eat 6.5 times the recommended amount of red meat. On the other hand, people in South Asia eat only half the amount suggested by the new planetary health diet. Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes in other areas. In sub-Saharan Africa, people on average eat 7.5 times the suggested amount of vegetables like potatoes and cassava.
The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is also not an option. Willet said, “If we can’t quite make it, it’s better to try and get as close as we can.”
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【答案】Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet. Tim Lang, the leader of the research, emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat. In other words, it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals. However, the food condition is not globally balanced. Tough as the target is to realize, it is worth trying. (69 words) 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇说明文。科学家们说：他们已经找到了适合人类和地球的最佳饮食。文章介绍了这种最佳饮食的必要性和特点。
【详解】这篇文章属于科学研究报道类的文章。那么，研究结果即是文章中心。故第一段的中心句是首句：Scientists in London say they have found the best diet for both humans and the planet（伦敦的科学家们说，他们已经找到了适合人类和地球的最佳饮食。）第二段的最后一句是
中心句：If we want to feed everyone, he explained, we all need to change what we eat and the way we eat by “improving food production and reducing food waste.通过该句，我们可以知道该段主要介绍的我们改变自己吃的食物和饮食方式的必要性。第三段回答了这个问题：What do you eat on the planetary health diet? 答案为：it is largely plant-based but still has small amounts of dairy, fish and meat（它主要是以植物为基础的，但仍然含有少量的乳制品、鱼和肉。）第四段的首句是中心句：Food situations around the world are not equal.（世界各地的食物状况是不平等的。）。同时该段提到：Meeting the targets for vegetables would need big changes（要达到健康饮食均衡的目标，需要做出巨大的改变）。最后一段的中心句为末句：The scientists admit their goal will be difficult to achieve. But for them doing nothing is also not an option.（科学家们承认他们的目标很难实现。但对他们来说，无所事事也不是一种选择。即：科学家们会竭尽全力来实现目标。）。综合上述几段的中心可知，文章的中心可概括为：Scientists claim they have obtained the best diet benefiting both humans and the planet. Tim Lang, the leader of the research, emphasized the significance of changing the food and the way we eat. In other words, it is more scientific for diet to be more based on plants than animals. However, the food condition is not globally balanced. Tough as the target is to realize, it is worth trying. 【点睛】