2019年高考英语高考真题和高考模拟题分项版汇编专题09短文改错(含解析)

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

On New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, what proved to be an unique experience. At 9:30, I arrived at the exhibition with my precious stamp album, eager and excited. To my delighted, there gathered crowds of stamp lover. Immediately I joined them and studied the stamps one by one. I was attracted by the artists’ delicate design and wanted to learn more. Then, some of us got together on twos and threes to share our collections, chat cheerfully about the stamps. We even told stories behind it like old friends. Time passed quickly and it was time to say goodbye to the friends.

I had a great time. Not only I appreciate for beautiful stamps, but also I made new friends with the same interest. This was really a specially celebration for the New Year. 【答案】

whatanOn New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, whichproved to be a unique experience.At

delighted9:30, I arrived at the exhibition with my precious stamp album, eager and excited. To my delight, loverthere gathered crowds of stamp lovers. Immediately I joined them and studied the stamps one by

one. I was attracted by the artists’ delicate design and wanted to learn more. Then, some of

chatonus got together intwos and threes to share our collections, chattingcheerfully about the stamps. itWe even told stories behind them like old friends. Time passed quickly and it was time to say

goodbye to the friends.

?I had a great time. Not only didI appreciate for beautiful stamps, but also I made new friends

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speciallywith the same interest. This was really a special celebration for the New Year.

【文章大意】这是一篇记叙文。记叙了作者在元旦去看了一个邮票展览的经过。

第一处:考查定语从句连接词。句意:元旦那天,我去看了一个邮票展览,这被证明是一次独特的经历。本句为非限定性定语从句修饰上文整个句子应用which。故what改为which。 第二处:考查冠词。unique为辅音音素开头的单词,故an改为a。

第三处:考查名词。句意:令我高兴的是,那里聚集了一群集邮爱好者。短语to one’s delight“令某人高兴的是”后跟名词,故delighted改为delight。

第四处:考查名词的数。lover为可数名词,由crowds of“成群的”修饰应用复数形式,故lover改为lovers。 第五处:考查介词。句意:然后,我们中的一些人三三两两地聚在一起分享我们的收藏品,愉快地谈论邮票。短语in twos and threes“三三两两”前跟介词in,故on改为in。

第六处:考查非谓语动词。本句已经存在谓语动词且句中没有连词,故chat只能做非谓语动词与逻辑主语构成主谓关系用现在分词,故chat改为chatting。

第七处:考查人称代词。句意:我们甚至像老朋友一样讲述他们背后的故事。此处指代上文stamps应用第三人称复数形式宾格,故it改为them。

第八处:考查倒装句。not为含有否定意义的副词位于句首,则其后要用部分倒装。故I前添加did。 第九处:考查介词。appreciate为及物动词,可直接跟宾语,故去掉for。

第十处:考查形容词。celebration为名词,需要形容词修饰,故specially改为special。 6.福建省漳州市第一中学2019届高三5月模拟考试

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \\ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Monday, it hit me that my beloved grandmother birthday was around the corner. I decided to make her an unique present. Without the slightest hesitation, I threw me into creating this priceless album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos, added up some decorations, and designed each pages carefully. Eventually, an album of love produced. Looked

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at my work with satisfaction, I couldn’t help imagining how delightedly my grandma would be.

Soon, the big day arrived. At the birthday party, I presented the album to Grandma. The moment she saw the special gift, she hugs me affectionately, tears rolling in her eyes, what made my parents smile genuinely as well. 【答案】

Last Monday, it hit me that my beloved birthday was around the corner. I decided

meanto make her a unique present. Without the slightest hesitation, I threw myself into creating

this priceless album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos, added

up some

pages?decorations, and designed each pagecarefully. Eventually, an album of love wasproduced. LookeddelightedlyLooking at my work with satisfaction, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted my grandma

would be.

Soon, the big day arrived. At the birthday party, I presented the album to Grandma. The moment

hugswhatshe saw the special gift, she hugged me affectionately, tears rolling in her eyes, whichmade

my parents smile genuinely as well.

【文章大意】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了作者为自己深爱的祖母亲手制作了一件特别的生日礼物。当祖母看到这个特别的礼物时,她深情地拥抱了作者,泪水在她的眼睛里打转,这让作者的父母由衷地笑了。

第一处:考查名词所有格。句意:上周一,我突然想到我深爱的祖母的生日就要到了。文中表示“祖母的生日”,用名词所有格,所以grandmother改成grandmother’s。

第二处:考查冠词。句意:我决定给她做一件独一无二的礼物。泛指“一件独一无二的礼物”,unique的首字母发音是辅音,所以an改成a。

第三处:考查固定用法。句意:我毫不犹豫地投入创作这张无价的专辑。throw oneself into投身于,该用法是固定用法,所以me改成myself。

第四处:考查动词。句意:我打开电脑,仔细地选择了一些照片,添加了一些装饰,仔细地设计了每一页。

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add是及物动词,后面直接接宾语,所以去掉up。

第五处:考查名词单复数。句意:我打开电脑,仔细地选择了一些照片,添加了一些装饰,仔细地设计了每一页。被each修饰,用名词单数,所以pages改成page。

第六处:考查时态和语态。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时。“相册”和“制作”之间是被动关系,用被动语态,an album是单数,所以在produced之前,加was。

第七处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我满意地看着我的作品,不禁想象我的祖母会有多么高兴。“看着”的逻辑主语是“我”,它们之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语,所以Looked改成Looking。

第八处:考查形容词。句意:我满意地看着我的作品,不禁想象我的祖母会有多么高兴。how之后接形容词,所以delightedly改成delighted。

第九处:考查时态。句意:当她看到这个特别的礼物时,她深情地拥抱了我,泪水在她的眼睛里打转,这让我的父母由衷地笑了。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以hugs改成 hugged。

第十处:考查非限制性定语从句。这里含有一个非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,指代整个主句内容,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,所以what改成which。

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