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2.培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新； 3.关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩； 4. …… 要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名； 3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2－3 分；
4.词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 We act, we improve Ladies and gentlemen,
We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
【答案】We act, we improve Ladies and gentlemen,
We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we should learn to be independent and honest. We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意多种句式交替运用，不要漏掉任何一个写作要点，注意叙述顺序符合逻辑关系。 可能用到的词组：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。 高分句型：
1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我们应该更加关心别人，感谢所有帮助过我们的人。
care more about更加关心，be thankful to对……感恩，who have helped us.为定语从句，修饰先行词the people。
2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 总之，我们行动越多，我们的提高就越好。 两个比较级的句子叠加，表示“越……越……”。
10.【2018年山东省枣庄市】Use the following information to write a paragraph about bees. ●Be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey ●They have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. ●Wise and busy ●No gains ●Does its own work
●Driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes ●Join together to build cells of wax（蜡质房子） for their honey ●How busy they are always ●Don't work
●That have six sides and are all of one shape and size ●A house called a hive ●One queen
Bees live in.. They are... There is,. in each hive. They a.. Each bee. They
Bees live in… They are… There is… in each hive. They all… Each bee… They build cells… It’s pleasant to see… But drones… They are… Children shouldn’t touch bees… No pains… Shouldn’t children…
【答案】Bees live in a house called a hive. They are wise and busy. There is one queen in each hive. They all join together to build cells of wax(蜡质房子) for their honey. Each bee does its own work. They build cells that have six sides and are all of one shape and size. It's pleasant to see how busy they are always, But drones don't work. They are driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes. Children shouldn't touch bees because they have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. No pains, no gains. Shouldn't children be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey?
11.【2018年上海市中考】Write at least 60 words on the topic\以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。
（注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考) used to do/be… try my best to do… make progress in( doing.…
【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it.
Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing.
No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.
【解析】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。