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书面表达
2017(A)
IX. 书面表达。（18分）
在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。 要求：
1. 故事必须原创；
2. 80--120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：
1. 描述你的照片(时间，地点，人物……)； 2. 分享你的故事(起因，经过，结果……)； 3. 谈谈你的感受(感动，怀念，影响……)。 This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, __________________________________________________
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【解析】此作文为记叙文，重点审题在一张照片和一个故事上，不能是几张照片或几个故事，那样就没有准确审题，造成偏题的情况，还有可能审题不对，写成只写照片上的内容或情况，而没有深挖照片背后的故事的作文。其基本时态以一般过去时来叙述，同时谈论自己的感受，使用一般现在时，同时注意上下文间的过渡连词。文章可以写成三段，第一段介绍照片的来源、包括地点、时间和人物等；第二段通过回忆的形式叙述与照片上的人或物相关且有意义故事发生的经过、原因和结果；第三段说出对这个故事的感受和体会，注意所写作文应该段落分明，上下文逻辑清晰，能有承上启下的句子或连接词，使段与段之间联系自然，同时文章中能尽量使用从句和相关连词等，使文章的词汇及句型丰富，这样写出来的作文才有可能得16和17分，甚至是满分。
【范文】 Possible version
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter! (117 words) 注意此范文的得分只能在16分左右，全文无语法和拼写错误，同时所写内容符合写作要求且完整，也应用了一些连接词如once, but，because of, though，还有也用了时间状语从句、结果状语从句、宾语从句、祈使句、感叹句等，主要是在词汇使用上不太丰富，并且没有亮笔之处。按评分标准的要求，故判定此范文为四档作文的最低档，即16分，当然也可为17分或三档作文的最高档15分。
2017(B)
IX. 书面表达。（18分）
在我们成长的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。 要求：
1. 故事必须原创；
2. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：
1. 分享故事(起因，经过，结果……)； 2. 表达感受(幸福，感动，思考……)； 3. ……
A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【析】根据题目要求知道应该写一篇记叙文，同时必须完成相应的要点内容，作文的关键是回忆，因此它的基准时态应该以过去时态为主，即一、二要点，而第三点发表自己对朋友的看法或观点，应该用一般现在时来叙述。
可能用到的句型或短语：help sb with sth, feel /be worried about, with one’s help, fall behind…，可能的连词：so, then, when, not …any more, no matter what…，可能用到宾语从句、时间状语从句、条件状语从句或比较状语从句和定语从句。 Possible version:
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot. In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happen, true friends will always be friends.
2018(A)
九、书面表达
44．（20分）假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难，请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封 email向他求助． 要求
1.80﹣120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词 2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称． 参考要点：
1．活动情况简介（时间、内容……）；
2．遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难…）； 3．请求帮助的事项． Dear Nick，
How's everything going？
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June． I'm very interested in it． There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books， sharing good stories and so on． It's a good chance for us to learn more about western culture． However， I have some problems． First， I don't have enough books． For example， I want to get some books about western history． Next， I'm not so good at English． I have trouble in reading． Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading？ I expect to hear from you soon． Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books， sharing good stories and so on．节日里有很多不同的活动，比如读好的英语书，分享好的故事等等． 这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 高分句型二
I have trouble in reading．我读书有困难． have trouble in doing sth．做某事有困难，是固定句型．
【解答】Dear Nick， How's everything going？
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June． I'm very interested in it． There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books， sharing good stories and so on【高分句型一】． It's a good chance for us to learn more about western culture．【要点一，活动情况简介】 However， I have some problems． First， I don't have enough books． For example， I want to get some books about western history． Next， I'm not so good at English． I have trouble in reading【高分句型二】 【要点二，遇到的困难】． Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading？ 【要点三，请求帮助的事项】 I expect to hear from you soon． Best wishes!
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，如but， so，then等．
2018(B)
IX．书面表达。（20分）
中澳友好协会准备就“A Gift from the Heart”为题举办征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子（生日、节日……）用心准备的礼物。 写作要求： 1. 80－120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：
1. 介绍特别的日子； 2. 分享赠送的礼物； 3. 表述礼物的意义。
A Gift from the Heart
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