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I. Improve the following Chinglish sentences.
1. My home has a dog.
2. If I do not study hard, I would be backward.
3. Never learn from me, since you are not so strong as I am. 4. We played very happily last night. 5. We will study to swim next week. 6. His age was very young. 7. My exam did not pass.
8. He said only a few sentences and then left. 9. Watching TV can widen our eyesight.
10. Living standards for the people in both urban and rural areas have
improved greatly.
11. We must oppose the practice of extravagance.
12. They have conducted a careful examination of the project. 13. He remained alive after experiencing the car accident.
14. I am determined to raise the level of my English knowledge. 15. Children should start learning knowledge from an early age. 16. A serous natural disaster has occurred in that province.
17. We shall approach the level of the economically developed countries. 18. With the final completion of the project, imports of foreign automobiles
have declined sharply.
19. The government has taken a series of measures to further improve regular
education and adult education.
20. All this conduct has severely damaged the reputation of the medical
profession and must be firmly banned. 21. Dear Mike:
I haven’t received your letter for a long time. How is your condition? Is your work busy? Please reply me early. Here life is very nervous because we have to do many things. The teachers give us too many exercises, so we cannot read when class is over. We have no method. Maybe the teachers can change the situation. 22. I forgot my pen in the classroom.
23. Alcoholic drinks are harmful to your body. 24．My car tire was broken on the highway. 25. The old man made a living by catching fish. 26. learn knowledge
27. raise flowers and raise a cat 28. make dinner 29. the note writes…
30. We should further improve Sino-Us relations. 31. It is a great event with historical significance.
32. My mom went to the shops to buy things for me yesterday. 33.Bacause it was very late, so they had to go home.
34. Looking from the mountaintop, the city appears very beautiful.
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35. There are more than 200 guests took part in their party. 36. The clock on the wall is not correct.
37. China nowadays has boosted scientific tourism.
38. Our university library has a lot of books on arts and humanities.
39. At the turn of the century, China’s economy got a substantial development.
II. Correct the comma splices.
1. Gone with the Wind is extremely long, it is never boring. 2. We are glad Tom is home, we’ve missed him.
3. Mom washed the dishes, I dried and put them away.
4. Some of our professors speak several foreign languages, Prof. Liu is a good
example.
5. The library had just closed, I couldn’t get any of the research books.
6. The boy suffered from many problems, his mother had to help him out of
his misery.
7. No one came to the party, it was a complete failure.
8. Some of the food crops failed, however, the cotton did quite well. 9. I like to read detective story, it makes me happy.
10. Human nature is seldom as simple as it appears, hasty judgments are
therefore often wrong.
III. Improve the following sentences, paying attention to unity and coherence. 1. Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
2. He said he would take the exam and pass it, but was not certain of it.
3. He read the magazine in the reading-room, which contained a lot of latest information about computer science.
4. Many people believe that one should eat garlic every day to prevent disease in the region.
5. The earthquake only damaged a few houses.
6. One student said that such a discussion was not helpful in class. 7. Mary called Beth every day when she was in hospital.
8. Instead of taking physics, chemistry was chosen by most students in the class. 9. After listening to the speaker’s inspiring speech, many questions were raised. 10. Although only a small boy, his father wanted him to do a man’s work on the farm.
11. When describing your tour in the three countries, slides may be helpful. 12. He was so tired that we saw him asleep at eight in the morning.
13. The landslide destroyed several houses and five people were killed by it. 14. The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well. 15. Angrily, bitterly, and with tears in her eyes, Jean Cretien finally retired. 16. What do the rich know about poverty and those who are hungry? 17. What one knows is more important than the wealth one has.
18. This summer, Ed visited Italy, France, and he also went his ancestor’s house in Spain. 19. If Jane were given the choice of doing the laundry or a movie, she would choose the
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movie.
20. Bruce not only enjoys singing, he enjoys playing the guitar as well. 21. Football is more popular in Europe than North America.
22. Bob either works at his home office or an office at Sanctuary Towers each day. 23. Helen believes in and is an advocate of women’s rights.
IV. Revise the following sentences.
1. Mr. Wang, a man trusted by his leaders and all his fellow workers, known as an expert in computer programming.
2. Flying from Beijing to London three days ago and back to Beijing yesterday, jet lag is troubling him.
3. Going to the library to borrow the novel, no copy was available.
4. When the meeting between the director of our company and representative of the American company came to an end, he expressed satisfaction with the result.
5. She put all her reference books into a box, which she would use after taking the new job.
6. This morning the president and a group of students were talking and ten minutes later they left.
7. There are more books in their library than my school. 8. This grammar book is a better one as far as I know.
9. He had a long talk with the visiting delegation, he mentioned all the problems that remained to be solved, however, no agreement was reached in the end.
10. They had a long discussion, nevertheless, they came to no conclusion.
11 While he was in Shanghai, he visited the newly developed area in Pudong, and is deeply impressed by the prosperity he has seen.
V. Improve the following sentences, paying attention to conciseness and emphasis. 1. In the early part of December there was a heavy snow in this area, and it snowed for three days without letup.
2. Students who are in their fourth year at the university go to visit the library regularly to look for material and reference books useful for the writing of their graduation papers.
3. Early in the morning there was a fog which covered all things in the whole city and people who driving were careful and they had to drive very slowly.
4. He has tasted the wines produced in different places and he says the red wine made in Beijing is the best.
5．In fact, he is usually realistic and sometimes he is also quite romantic.
6．Each time there was a knock at the door he was nervous, for he feared that someone might come to bring him more bad news.
7. When you read the beginning of the book, you understand the meaning of the title. You will understand it when you come to the end of the book.
8.China has a population of 1.3 billion. She must do much to limit the growth of population.
9.Some people like to say “that’s neat” when they mean to say “that’s good.” It is a
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slang expression.
10. She enjoys talking with friends and is never tired when she is chatting with her good friends.
11. The referee raised his right hand in which he was holding a yellow card.
12. Moral integrity is more important than life, position, or wealth, according to Confucius,
13.Altogether 12 novels were written by this famous novelist during his lifetime.
14. Such a new view on the working of the universe could only have been put forward by a scientist like him.
15.Rich people in the West usually ask lawyers for help whenever they get into trouble with other people.
16. Meaningful content is the most important quality of a composition, above all. 17.She does not care too much about prices; she thinks the quality of things is more important.
18.These children are busy playing with toys. They have little time for studies. 19. In the evenings television is watched by almost all people in this village. 20.Football is played by almost all boys in this school.
21.He speaks German well. His written German is also good.
22.The Government praises itself in every possible way, but the Opposition says ugly things about it whenever possible.
23.There are twenty-five students who have already expressed a desire to attend the program next summer. It is they and their parents who stand to gain the most by the government grant.
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