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参考词汇:“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 方面)。In addition, __________(其他的建议),I “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest am sure_________ (对建议内容所作的承诺)。 Dear Peter, Please inform me__________( 期望被建议 I would like to express my congratulations 人作出的回应)。 to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Your sincerely Bridge” Chinese speech contest. I know that you Li Hua were not good at Chinese at first. However, you I. 常用的表达: practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the 1. 给某人提建议 give sb. some advice (on) saying goes, “Everything comes to him who 2. 如下 as follow waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 match is very difficult for a foreign student. So have difficulty/trouble in doing sth. I?m so surprised that you become champion of this 4. 利用 make use of competition. If you go on studying Chinese harder, 5. 向某人征求意见 ask sb. for advice you will have the opportunity to study in China. At 6. 制订计划 make a plan last, I hope to see you and communicate with each 7. 认为……有用 other. find…helpful/useful/beneficial Sincere congratulations to you again! 8. 参加 take part in/participate in

Yours, 9. 听从某人的建议 follow one?s advice Li Hua 10. 把……考虑在内

take sth. into account/consideration

11. 得到改善 get improved 六、建议信

12. 有所好转 change for the better 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方

13. 依我看来 in my opinion/in my view/ 接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题。建议

from my point of view 信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当

14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你…… 先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具

I have received your letter saying that you… 有合理性和说服力。通常包括:

15. 我建议…… 1. 说明写信目的(点出建议的主题)。

I would like to suggest that…/ 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。

I would like to make a recommendation that…/ 3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。

I am writing to advise you of…/ 建议信模板一: If I were you, I would…/ Dear ________, May I suggest that…/ You have asked me for my advice with regard I would like to put forward the suggestion to _____ (问题), and I will try to make some that… conductive suggestions here. II.常用的句式表达: In my humble(谦虚的) opinion, you would 1. 你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建be wise to take the following actions (建议的内设性的建议。 容): First, ________. (As is known, ________.) You have asked me for my advice with regard Second, (to make economic profits, ) ________. to…and I will try to make some constructive Third, ________. (As many of them ________.) I hope you will find these proposals useful, suggestions.

2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。 and I would be ready to discuss this matter with I feel that it would be beneficial if… you to further details. (Or:Your kind consideration 3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。 of my suggestions will be highly appreciated). Good Luck with your_______(祝愿). I hope you will find these suggestions

helpful/useful. Yours sincerely 4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。 Li Hua I trust you?ll take my suggestion into account./I trust you?ll take good consideration of my 建议信模板二 suggestion. Dear_________, 5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。 I am delighted to learn that ______(写信的原 . I would be more than happy to see… 因)。In my opinion, ________________(表述建议III. 习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文) 内容)。On the one hand, _________(提出建议的Dear Roy, 理由一)。On the other hand, _________ (建议的理由二)。 As to _____________(具体到某一方 I am glad to receive your letter ask for my 面的建议),I suggest __________(建议内容)。If advice to how to learn Chinese well. ____________(供被建议人选择的条件),It is unnecessary for you to _______(建议内容的另一 Here are few suggestions. First, this is

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important to take a Chinese course, as you?ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you?ll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.

Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.

Best wishes!

Yours truly, Li Hua

IV. 模拟训练题:

1.假定你是李华,请根据所给材料,给Lora写一封回信。要点如下:

1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。 2. Lora父母不同意的理由。 3. 你给Lora的具体建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Lora,

I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents don?t allow you to do so. I understand your situation.

I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps they?d like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.

I think you had better have a talk with your

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parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.

Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer. Yours truly, Li Hua

2.假定你是李华,最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡,她很想念父母及家人,有时候思念至深,常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此,请你给Jenny写一封建议信,要点如下:

1. 鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念,志存高远,四海为家。

2. 就Jenny的目前状况,提两到三个建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Jenny,

I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before.

People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.

Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.

Wish you happy every day. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

V. 更多关于建议信的范文背诵:

假设你是高三学生李华,面临毕业,你发现许多学生正准备把旧课本当废品扔掉,你认为这样是浪费。请你用英语根据下列要点给某英语报社写一封信,并针对此现象提出建议。 信中应包括以下内容:1. 说明写信的目的 2. 批评该行为 3. 提出建议 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Editior, I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I?m writing to draw your attention to some important behavior among us students-many Senior Three studetns are busy packing up their used books to throw them away. I find it not a

proper way to do so, for it better arranged, they can be reused.

I wonder if the school could set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, “students should be encouraged to sort out their books. We can keep some special books as part of our memories, which may remind us of our golden past later in life. In addition, giving some away to the Senior One or Tow studetns is a good idea. They will be grateful for our kindness. Beside, a low-carbon life is being ncouraged. Dealing with the used books in proper ways can reduce the carbon dioxide that we cause or produce. Thank you for your consideration. Your faithfully, Li Hua

七.约稿信

约稿信是指报纸、杂志、文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容(约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容,也可让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容),并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。

I. 典型范文背诵:(2015全国卷I)

假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下: 1. 栏目介绍。 2. 稿件内容;

3. 稿件长度:约400词汇 4. 交稿日期:6月28日前天 注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的; 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the culture in your part of the Unite State? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant. 400 words would be fine. Could you have your article before June 28?

I?m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua

II.常用的表达

1.我想请你为……写一篇文章

I would like to ask you to write an article for… 2. 你可以写一些关于……

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You can write something about… 3. ……是很受……欢迎的

…is very popular with…/among… 4. 它刊登的文章是由……写的

It carries articles written by… 5. 你能写点关于……吗?

Would you please write something about…? 6. 我们会特别欢迎有关……的文章

We would especially welcome passages about… 7. 你可以写与……相关的任何东西

You can write anything relevant to… 8. 约120个词就好。

About 120 words would be fine. 9. 我们在……之前能收到你的文章吗?

Could we have your article before…? 10. 体育专栏/娱乐专栏

sports column/entertainment column

11. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column 12. 读者范围 scope of readers 13. 语言风格 language style 14. 改编自 be adapted from

15. 延长截止日期extend the deadline III. 常用的句式表达

1.我期待您的答复在您最方便的时候。

I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I?d like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper.

3.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗?

Can you write something about your school life? 4. 我期待你的回复。

I am looking forward to your reply.

5. 你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我,字数约120个字就好。

You?d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine. IV. 习作修改(做短文改错,背经典范文) Dear Nancy,

I?d like to ask you write an article for our school?s English magazine. The “Nature” section provide a nice platform for us students to learn more about nature. In this section there are the wide variety of English materials availability to English learners. And here are some relevant detail about the articles we were eager for. Firstly, not only can you write anything about the life of wild animals, but also you can focus at the knowledge about natural plants. Secondly, your article can have a title which made up by yourself with a vocabulary of about 300. Finally, you may

finished your article by March 18.

I?m looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours, Li Hua

V. 模拟训练题:

1. 假定你是李华,你校英文报“英语之声”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍怎样学好英语的文章。请你给英国朋友Jack写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下:

1. 怎样练习听说读写。 2. 怎样记单词。

3. 稿件长度:约300词。 4. 交稿日期:4月20日前。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Jack,

I would like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “Voice of English” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about “How to learn English well”. Would you please write something about the learning methods of listening, speaking, reading and writing? And we would especially welcome articles about the best way to remember new words. Would you keep a vocabulary notebook? By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. About 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before April 20th? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua

2. 假定你是李华,你校英文报“英语角”栏目拟刊登外国笔友介绍自己家乡近十年的变化的文章。请你给英国朋友Mike写一封约稿信向他约稿。要点如下:

1. 衣食住行的变化。 2. 环境变化。

3. 稿件长度:约300词。 4. 交稿日期:5月15日前。 注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Mike,

I would like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “English Corner” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about their hometowns. Would you please write something about the changes of food, clothing, housing and transportation in recent 10 years?

And we would especially welcome articles about the changes of the environment, especially the mountains and the rivers. By the way, your article may have a title made up by yourself. 300 words would be fine. Could I have your article before

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May 15th?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Li Hua

八、邀请信

邀请信包括宴会、舞会、晚餐、婚礼等各种邀请信件。要求叙事一定要清楚、明白,要写清楚三个方面的内容:

1. 发出邀请;邀请对方参加活动的具体内容、时间和地点; 2. 邀请对方的原因。 3. 期待对方接受邀请。 I.邀请信模板; Dear _______, There will be a _________(内容) at/in ______(地点) on ________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at ______(具体时间)。 This will be followed by a _________(进一步的安排). At around __________(时间), we will have ________(另一个安排). Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it. My phone number is _____. Looking forward to _________. Your sincerely Li Hua Dear________ , I?m writing to invite you to ______(开门见山提出事件/活动) to be held/hosted by ______(举办机构) at/in _______(活动地点)______ on(活动时间)。It would be pleasant/honored to have you here. During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in. First, ______(要举行的活动内容一). Second, ________(要举行的活动内容二). I know/believe that you will be very interested in________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing, _________(受邀请人参加的理由一). Second/For another, _____________(受邀请人参加的理由二). The conference/party would not be complete without you! The party/conference will begin at _______(提出活动的地点). Is it possible for us to meet at the _______(具体约定时间) and we do hope you can come. Yours, Li Hua II.常用的表达:

1. 邀请某人做某事 invite sb. to do sth. 2. 代表某人 on behalf of sb.

3. 为了做某事 in order/aiming to do sth.