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姓名 班级 学号

【地点复习】

以下是你学校体育馆的基本情况 历史:40年的历史,2006年重建

位置:教学大楼的左边,大操场的西边,面朝学校大门

结构:占地面积750平方米,共三层。一楼有游泳池;二楼有排球、篮球、羽毛球、乒乓球场;三楼有报告厅。

特点:设备现代,环境优美。

开放时间:早上6::30到晚上10:00,周末照常

议论文写作一

——对立观点

【经典回顾】

Last week, our class held a debate about whether it is good for high school students to make as many friends as they can. Firstly, the supporters believe there will be more people who are concerned about you if you have more friends. Secondly, whatever troubles you are going through, you can receive help from more friends. However, the other students hold a different view. They say that students have got to join in a lot of activities if they have more friends, which will have a bad effect on their studies. Besides, they find it difficult to get along well with all the friends at one time. Lastly, once the friendship is destroyed, people will have got to suffer from much more pain, which people find hard to recover from. In my opinion, high school students should pay more attention to qualities rather than quantities of friends.

结构:1. 提出___________ 2. _______观点论述 3. _____________ 【步步为赢】

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姓名 班级 学号

1. 提出主题

1) 我们就……进行了热烈的讨论

2) 关于……的观点产生了分歧

3) 不同人持不同观点

4) 人们对此产生了不同的态度

2. 表达观点 1) 一些支持……

2) 一些人持……观点

3) 有些同学赞成/反对这一观点……

4) 支持/反对这一观点的人们认为……

3. 不同观点

1) 但是,有些人持不同观点……/相反观点……

2) 反对的人们却不这么认为。

3) 一枚硬币有两面。另一方面人们反对……

4) 常用衔接词

and, as well as, also, besides, ___________, ____________, ____________(此外), like, unlike, ________________(正相反), on the other hand …… 5) 表达自己观点

【基础写作】请根据下面要求写一篇文章 现在许多城市 都在进行旧城区改造。在这个过程中有许多历史悠久的老建筑面临被拆的命运。班上的同学在讨论课上对此发表了各自的看法,请你把这些看法写成一篇英语短文。

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姓名 班级 学号

40%的同学赞成,原因主要是: 1. 改善市民的居住环境更重要; 2. 很多老建筑都已经很破旧,很危险。 你自己的观点:…… [写作要求]

60%的同学反对,原因主要有: 1. 很多老建筑很有价值; 2. 有些老建筑是城市的标志。 1)只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容(不包括已给出的句子)。 2)介绍须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。

词汇:1. 市民的居住环境: the living conditions of the citizens 2. 破旧:shabby

The woman often called the First Lady of New York died on August. Brooke Astor was one hundred five years old. The extremely wealthy and famous New Yorker spent much of her life __1__(help)the needy in her beloved city.

She was born in Portsmouth, New Hampshire. She was the only child of a high level military officer. After two earlier __2__(marry) ,she married Vincent Astor in 1953 again. He came from a family __3__ had been rich for least on hundred years. Among other things, he owed many buildings in New York City. Brooke Astor became one of the __4__(rich)women in the world when Vincent Astor died. She also became head of a huge charity organization_ _5__(found) by her husband. He repeatedly had told her she would have fun giving __6__ his money. And apparently she did. Missus Astor gave tens of millions of dollars __7__(main)to places and people in New York City. She said it was the sensible choice because that was __8__ the money had been made. She gave financial support to the city’s cultural centers,its poor and disabled as __9__ as to many other smaller charities. When she died, the mayor of New York said the city would not be what it is today __10__ her support.

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【参考范文】

The Gym of our school has a history of 40 years and was rebuilt in 2006. Facing the school gate, it is located on the left of the school classroom building, and on its east lies the playground. It is a three-storeyed building with modern equipment and excellent surroundings, which covers an area of 750 square meters. On the first floor is the swimming pool, on the second ground are the volleyball, baseball, badminton and table tennis courts and on the third, the lecture hall. The opening time is from 6:30 a.m. to 10:30 p.m. on weekdays, and it works as usual on weekends.

In today’s class, we discussed about whether the old buildings with a long history should be removed in the old city reconstruction.

About 40 percent of the students agree that the old buildings should be removed. They think it more important to improve the living conditions of the citizens. Besides, many old buildings are already shabby and dangerous as well. While the others hold the opposite opinion that a lot of old buildings are valuable and some are even the symbols of the city. In my opinion, some old buildings should be kept well if they are really important to our city’s history and culture.

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开头部

We had a heated discussion(激烈的讨论) about /on… Opinions about…are divided.

Different people hold different ideas/opinions. People have taken different attitudes towards, (2)表达观点

Some are for(赞成)the idea... ...of them hold the opinion/think that...

...of the class are in favor of(赞成) the idea that...

People who are for/against(赞成/反对)the idea think that... Some people believe that...,but others argue(争辩;辩解) that…. (3)不同观点

However,...of them hold a different view that …/hold the opposite(相反的) opinion. People who are against it don't think so.

However,each coin has two sides.On the other hand, people object(反对) that... (4)常用衔接词

and,as well as,also,besides, in addition, moreover, like ,unlike ,On the contrary(正相反;恰恰相反),on the other hand… (5)表达自己观点

In my opinion,…

As far as l am concerned,… As for me,...

From my personal point of view,… In my opinion,it would be better to…

1.[解析] sb. spend time (in) doing sth.某人花(时间,精力)做某事。 [答案] helping

2.[解析] 从下文she married Vincent Astor in 1953 again.得知,她以前经历了两次婚姻。

[答案] marriages

3.[解析] had been rich前缺主语。这是定语从句,只能用that/which。 [答案] that/which

4.[解析] 根据句意得知是最富有的。 [答案] richest

5.[解析] found创办,成立;建立,过去分词短语作定语,表被动。 [答案] founded

6.[解析] give away赠送;赠予;颁发。 [答案] away

7.[解析] adv.大部分地;主要地。 [答案] mainly

8.[解析] 句子the money had been made主谓齐全。根据句意是因为这些钱应该用于人们和社会。

[答案] where

9.[解析] as well as也,又,和。 [答案] well

10.[解析] 没有她的支持,就成就不了现在的纽约。 [答案] without

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